This is a little korean girl I just started tutoring in English. She's holding a picture of a bird she drew and named Ni-Ni. She is an incredibly bright and spirited girl and speaks English just about as well as I do. I get a kick out of hearing her thoughts. The first day I tutored her she gave me this story she wrote. It's amazing!
Title: Bye Head
One day there was a little girl who wanted to smack her own face. And she did.
"Oh," she said. "I will never smack my face again."
Then a unicorn passed by and said, "Is that poop next to you?" Then the little girl knew the unicorn was a boy who was pretending to be a unicorn.
She saw a table that was alive. She was so scared she dipped her finger in the toilet. She was so scared she bought a camera. She saw a map and when she looked at it she died. She took a shower with the camera. But it was too late. The camera broke! Then when she stopped she knew she was dreaming.
Saturday, February 21, 2009
Ni-Ni
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Brae Howard
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3 comments:
sounds like a match to me!
always nice to find it was only a dream.
i think having it be a dream is the ONLY possible way to close that story..
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