Saturday, February 21, 2009

Ni-Ni


This is a little korean girl I just started tutoring in English. She's holding a picture of a bird she drew and named Ni-Ni. She is an incredibly bright and spirited girl and speaks English just about as well as I do. I get a kick out of hearing her thoughts. The first day I tutored her she gave me this story she wrote. It's amazing!

Title: Bye Head

One day there was a little girl who wanted to smack her own face. And she did.
"Oh," she said. "I will never smack my face again."
Then a unicorn passed by and said, "Is that poop next to you?" Then the little girl knew the unicorn was a boy who was pretending to be a unicorn.
She saw a table that was alive. She was so scared she dipped her finger in the toilet. She was so scared she bought a camera. She saw a map and when she looked at it she died. She took a shower with the camera. But it was too late. The camera broke! Then when she stopped she knew she was dreaming.

3 comments:

kate said...

sounds like a match to me!

Damien said...

always nice to find it was only a dream.

Kyrie Howard said...

i think having it be a dream is the ONLY possible way to close that story..